The Last Stanza

You and I

it's the heavy black cloud

it's the long sigh
it's the numb hand
it's the teary eye

it's the lifeless shadow
it's the rusty pipe
it's the forgotten friend
it's the meaningless life

it's you
and it's i.

 

richa ( Jun 19th 2011, 02:10 PM ) says:

nice one!
also,,cold feet!..

Anjhero ( Jun 20th 2011, 10:15 AM ) says:

luvd it!

Binaya Ghi8mire ( Jun 21st 2011, 03:38 PM ) says:

Nice, but needs little polishing.

kamal ( Jul 14th 2011, 06:24 PM ) says:

hey!!......... kaha harayou timi ktea??

electric gypsy ( Jul 15th 2011, 07:52 AM ) says:

kamal!!!!!! :D

Disturbed Entity ( Jul 19th 2011, 02:53 AM ) says:

its the flood its the thunder

its a pale yellow sky
its the merciless suffice
its jus an innocent hi

its a dying hope
its a bottomless slope
its an eternal divide
its the colourful white

its whom
n its why

electric gypsy ( Jul 19th 2011, 10:59 AM ) says:

damn! thats better than my version! :)

Disturbed Entity ( Jul 22nd 2011, 11:37 PM ) says:

well thnx a load !! ..it ain't better though ....jus another words for your own sentences..:)

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