Our Latest Anthem
What would you call a tar speck on your sheet squeaky clean?
What would you call dreaming of a shangrila you've never seen?
What would you call gunning down coconuts that cry and bleed?
What would you call teary candles,melting that can't burn complete?
Fate, mighty fate.
Circumstances, shrewd, circumstances devour futile coconuts and candles.
Shaky coconuts, tactless candles surrender to ugly fate .
What would you call emaciated rats picking holes on your sacks?
What would you call men making rods for their own backs?
What would you call tramps eating off gold plates?
Perfect Mishaps!
Fate, dear, fate chances, blind, chances ignore plunders and blunders.
Lucky tramps, fearless rats make the best of circumstances.
What a beautifully written poem, so much imagery and fantasy and facts all mixed into one...where can i read more?!!
Liked the imagery of whole poem and Liked the following lines very much:
What would you call teary candles,melting that can't burn complete?
Fate, mighty fate.
Shaky coconuts, tactless candles surrender to ugly fate .
Fate, dear, fate chances, blind, chances ignore plunders and blunders.
Lucky tramps, fearless rats make the best of circumstances.
Very nice! Last two lines say a lot!
~ Dibyendra
why is it that most brilliant poems emerge from a sense of immense disillusionment?







Love the poem....very very well put...fate...mishaps...great!