The Last Stanza

I Need to Pee

One two three

Ladder

Four five six

Ladder

Seven eight nine

Ladder

Stop mama! Stop!

It's full

My bladder

Don’t you see?

I need to pee

Looza Mahaju ( Aug 25th 2009, 09:30 AM ) says:

Interesting poem this! Reminds me of lots of very interesting things, which I don't think I can mention here, without being edited out. Again! Cheers for the poet. He managed to add humor to the calls of the nature. More than lines of people peeing along the highway? I don't think so. But that just might been his point of inspiration!

richa ( Aug 25th 2009, 09:37 AM ) says:

hehe funny!

darkelf ( Aug 25th 2009, 03:17 PM ) says:

Very creative and damn funny!!

ayushma ( Aug 25th 2009, 06:03 PM ) says:

Read more at http://mulberrycloud.blogspot.com/
awesome and hilarious! keep it up my man!

susan ( Feb 21st 2010, 05:22 PM ) says:

the best one here. i love it and wud like to read more from this poet. AWzzzsomee

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