The Last Stanza

Destination

Descending from the sky
a drop of rain
asked the other:

                            Where
                            are
                            you
                            going
                            to
                            fall?

The other replied:

                            Wherever
                            may
                            we
                            fall,
                            in
                            the
                            ocean
                            we
                            shall
                            meet
                            after
                            all! 

 

(Originally published in Stars and Fireflies.)

kneerub rimal ( Apr 23rd 2010, 12:18 PM ) says:

in the ocean we shall meet after all...

but one fell into a mouth
that went towards the south
and became an astronaut
who flew into the space

and when he reached the space
he was all in daze
and decided,
that he would never
ever leave the place

and one day when he died
with a spacy wrinkled face
the raindrop was left floating
in the big bloody space

so you see
it sometimes depends where you fall,
for all raindrops don't meet after all

saleel ( Apr 23rd 2010, 01:34 PM ) says:

i like the poem that follows lol. so funny.

Ranju ( Apr 23rd 2010, 07:04 PM ) says:

'tis true 'tis true!!

mridul ( Apr 24th 2010, 03:26 PM ) says:

Loved both-- the poem and its parody, too (though the parody, i feel, misses the real point of the poem)!
Keep it up-- both the poet and the parodier!

Prakash ( May 11th 2010, 05:30 PM ) says:

Thanks all!
Enjoyed going through your responses!
Prakash Subedi

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