The Last Stanza
Destination
( Apr 23rd 2010, 01:34 PM ) says:
i like the poem that follows lol. so funny.
( Apr 23rd 2010, 07:04 PM ) says:
'tis true 'tis true!!
( Apr 24th 2010, 03:26 PM ) says:
Loved both-- the poem and its parody, too (though the parody, i feel, misses the real point of the poem)!
Keep it up-- both the poet and the parodier!
( May 11th 2010, 05:30 PM ) says:
Thanks all!
Enjoyed going through your responses!
Prakash Subedi







in the ocean we shall meet after all...
but one fell into a mouth
that went towards the south
and became an astronaut
who flew into the space
and when he reached the space
he was all in daze
and decided,
that he would never
ever leave the place
and one day when he died
with a spacy wrinkled face
the raindrop was left floating
in the big bloody space
so you see
it sometimes depends where you fall,
for all raindrops don't meet after all