The Last Stanza

Eyes

by Prakash Subedi 18 January 2010

I opened my eyes

            and

            looked at the world—

I closed my eyes

           and

           saw it.

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prakash ( Feb 9th 2010, 07:25 AM ) says:

Thank you Suraj and Shana for your kind words!
Have been writing a lot of poems recently...and will try to share more!
Prakash Subedi

shana dongol ( Feb 8th 2010, 12:01 PM ) says:

Very beautiful poem reads like a haiku and really touches the heart.

suraj shakya ( Jan 23rd 2010, 01:09 AM ) says:

wow! still m trying to close my eyes occasionally to enjoy this poem!

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