The Last Stanza
Lazy Morning
Curled up my body,
Beneath the ocean of my balmy sheet
Wrapping me like a small baby
Making me warm
Touching me gentle
The sun in the sky
Burning and glowing
The birds on my window
Chirping and singing
I dont want to wake up
It's chilled in the morning
Oh foggy cold winter
It's getting harder
Beneath the ocean of my balmy sheet
Wrapping me like a small baby
Making me warm
Touching me gentle
The sun in the sky
Burning and glowing
The birds on my window
Chirping and singing
I dont want to wake up
It's chilled in the morning
Oh foggy cold winter
It's getting harder
( Jan 12th 2010, 11:10 AM ) says:
good attempt Gam...........liked the poem but find it somehow incomplete.......can't wait to read more of your poem in future.............keep up the good work :-D
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Good (first) attempt, Sangam...
But I find these line "The sun in the sky/ Burning and glowing..." Somehow incongruent to poem's mood!
Think of writing one for NWEN Poetry competition (Hem sir will let you know more!)
Prakash Subedi