The Last Stanza

Dry Clean

Dried tears, tracing strange patterns

in my pillow -
 
it’s time to dry clean

 

sadikshya ( Jul 21st 2010, 12:22 PM ) says:

what a cute little haiku!

Autumn Sky ( Oct 13th 2010, 04:15 PM ) says:

A very interesting poem. The abrupt change in mood in the last line is very effective. It is very nice the way you capture that the persona has perhaps gotten over whatever trouble it was and leaves the right amount of questions in the mind of the reader after it is over.

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